Do these revised sentences look alright?
I’m supposed to correct them for grammar, punctuation, capitalization, number style, usage, and spelling.
1. The top five food service franchises are McDonalds, Subway, Sandwhiches & Salads, Burger King, 7-Eleven, and Dairy Queen.
3. The cooker adjusts itself automatically despite the user setting the time and temperature.
5. We rented the 8205 sq. meter building in Winnipeg’s exchange district, to many small space tenants.
7. Proper tools and modern equipment make businesses run smoother.
9. Last Fall, TiCycle installed a network to link five PC’s to its factory and retail stores.
11. In Edmonton at the Delta Residence Inn, a one bedroom suit is 130.00 a night
13. Between you and me, do you prefer a backpacking trip to the Rockies or river rafting down the Snake River?
15. The President, CEO, and three managers will tour our facilities in Nova Scotia and Newfoundland.
A few small changes. I only put the sentences on here that needed changed. The ones I omitted are fine.
1. The top five food service franchises are McDonalds, Subway Sandwhiches & Salads, Burger King, 7-Eleven and Dairy Queen.
3. The cooker adjusts itself automatically, despite the user setting the time and temperature.
5. We rented the 8205 sq. meter building in Winnipeg’s exchange district to many small space tenants.
9. Last fall, TiCycle installed a network to link five PCs to its factory and retail stores.
11. In Edmonton, at the Delta Residence Inn, a one bedroom suit is 130.00 a night
15. The President, CEO and three managers will tour our facilities in Nova Scotia and Newfoundland.
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| | Five Editions of Dale Of The Mounted DEW Line, Atlantic, Hong Kong Newfoundland $9.99 |
| | Canada Newfoundland five cent 1943c – bright UNC $9.99 |
| | Five Newfoundland Related Lapel Pins – Nice Variety $5.86 |
| | cc581:Stamps Newfoundland #40 Five Cent Harp Seal – Used $0.99 |
| | cc585:Stamps Newfoundland #55 Five Cent Harp Seal – Used $0.99 |
| | cc592:Stamps Newfoundland #65 Five Cent Mining – MH $0.99 |
| | cc600:Stamps Newfoundland #85 Five Cent Duke of York – MH $9.99 |
| | cc603:Stamps Newfoundland #91 Five Cent View of Cupids – MH $0.99 |
| | 1917-C NF NEWFOUNDLAND TWENTY-FIVE CENTS $6.00 |
| | LOT OF FIVE VARIOUS SILVER NEWFOUNDLAND COINS ‘TYPE SET’ $29.35 |
| | NEWFOUNDLAND Silver Twenty Five Cents Quarter Coin (#C805) $8.99 |
| | 1919C Newfoundland twenty five cents silver circulated a nice coin $13.70 |
| | 1882H Newfoundland twenty five cents silver circulated a nice coin $22.51 |
| | 1941 5 Five Cents New Foundland Canadian Province Silver Coin ~ King George VI $0.99 |
| | 1941C Newfoundland Silver Five Cent (1941 George VI) $3.99 |
| | 1888 Newfoundland Five Cent Coin. ICCS F-15. Very Rare $332.78 |
| | 1919 Newfoundland SILVER Twenty Five Cents Coin (Canada) – Quarter Dollar – 25¢ $5.99 |
| | 1940C Newfoundland Silver Five Cent (Gaeorge VI) $4.99 |
| | 1870 GOOD Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $67.99 |
| | 1880 GOOD-VERY GOOD Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 (dings) $53.99 |
| | 1881 GOOD Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $41.99 |
| | 1888 Obverse # 3 VERY GOOD Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $71.29 |
| | 1903 FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $10.99 |
| | 1917 c FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $4.79 |
| | 1917 c VERY FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $12.39 |
| | 1919 c VERY GOOD Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $6.69 |
| | 1929 c FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $3.39 |
| | 1938 VERY FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $3.79 |
| | 1938 EXTREMELY FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $8.59 |
| | 1941 c VERY FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $3.19 |
| | 1941 c VF-XF Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $3.79 |
| | 1941 c EXTREMELY FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $4.79 |
| | 1942 c EXTREMELY FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $5.69 |
| | 1942 c EXTREMELY FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #2 $5.69 |
| | 1942 c EXTREMELY FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #3 $5.69 |
| | 1942 c XF-AU Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $9.99 |
| | 1943 c VERY FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $3.09 |
| | 1943 c EXTREMELY FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $5.69 |
| | 1943 c EXTREMELY FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #2 $5.69 |
| | 1943 c XF-AU Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $8.59 |
| | 1945 c EXTREMELY FINE Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 $4.79 |
| | 1945 c AU Newfoundland Five Cents Silver #1 (minor ding reverse) $9.39 |
| | 1917 c VERY GOOD Newfoundland Twenty-Five Cents Silver #1 $7.59 |
| | 1917 c FINE Newfoundland Twenty-Five Cents Silver #1 $9.49 |
| | 1917 c FINE Newfoundland Twenty-Five Cents Silver #2 $9.49 |
| | 1894 Newfoundland Silver Five Cent $15.00 |
| | 1896 Newfoundland Silver Five Cent (Queen Victoria) $18.00 |
| | 1896 Newfoundland Silver Five Cent (Queen Victoria) $12.00 |
| | 1917 Uncirculated Newfoundland Five Cents $329.00 |
| | 1894 five cents newfoundland about very fine $67.53 |
| | 1896 five cents newfoundland a nice coin $12.72 |
| | Newfoundland Canadian Five Cent Piece – 5 cent – 1929 $10.99 |
| | Newfoundland Canadian Five Cent Piece – 5 cent – 1917 $9.99 |
| | NEWFOUNDLAND TWENTY-FIVE CENTS 1917C…. GEORGEV $9.99 |
| | Newfoundland five cents George VI head 194. Nice coin in VG condition. See Scan $1.56 |
| | 1919 Newfoundland Silver Five Cent $13.99 |
| | NEW Five Months in Labrador and Newfoundland During … $13.39 |
| | 1943 five cents newfoundland almost UNC $11.75 |
| | 1940 c five cents newfoundland almost UNC $34.26 |
| | old newfoundland coin 1940-c five cents 5c sterling silver pre canada lot x1 $11.90 |
| | old newfoundland coin 1941-c five cents 5c sterling silver pre canada lot x1 $8.95 |
| | 1917 newfoundland twenty five cents about EF $14.68 |
| | 1917-c Silver Five Cent Coin Newfoundland ( About Uncirculated ) #6574A $39.00 |
| | 1941 Silver Five Cent Coin Newfoundland ( AU ) #5524A $8.00 |
| | 1943 Newfoundland Silver Five Cent $4.99 |
| | 1917 Newfoundland Silver Five Cent $4.99 |
| | 1941 Newfoundland silver five cent coin Extra Fine Plus $3.95 |
| | Newfoundland #C13 – #C17 XF/NH Set Of Five $290.00 |
| | 1881 Newfoundland Silver Five Cent. Better Grade $150.00 |
| | 1894 Newfoundland Silver Five Cent. Better Grade $65.00 |
| | 1945C Newfoundland Silver Five Cent $2.99 |
| | 1917 newfoundland twenty five cents silver nice luster $67.53 |
| | NEWFOUNDLAND 1894 FIVE CENTS AU+ $940.00 |
| | 1904H Newfoundland Five Cents PCGS MS-65 ** Sensational GEM BU Half Dime $1,500. $978.76 |
| | 1888 Newfoundland Five Cents ICCS VF-20 * RARE Date Silver Nfld. Half-Dime $300. $220.22 |
| | 1870 Newfoundland Five Cents ICCS VF-20 * RARE Date Silver Nfld. Half Dime $500. $391.50 |
| | ** 1944 ** NEWFOUNDLAND * 5 * Five Cent * Silver * Rare $390.53 |
| | 1938 Newfoundland Silver Five Cent $19.99 |
| | 1943 C Newfoundland Canada Five Cents coin # KM 19 $40.00 |
| | 1941 C Newfoundland Canada Five Cents coin # Y 19 $25.00 |
